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A Question from Poet

Postby lizzie » Sun Oct 29, 2006 9:48 pm

I sent the link to "Love's too Familiar a Word" to a friend who's a poet. He wondered if you could clarify the last stanza

"know it's lonely in the world tonight
because here is more than what's deserved
and the imbalance can't be summed in black and white
because love's too familiar a word. "

His take? There was an imbalance between the two people in the poem, not between the couple and the world. I believe it's the latter.

There's no bet going here, just curious.

Thanks.
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Postby EllisPaul » Wed Nov 01, 2006 1:01 am

lizzie--
the imbalance is between the woman that's there and what the narrator feels he deserves...

does that help?
thanks for asking...
Ellis

it should have read--"because WHAT"S here is more than what's deserved"...

I think there was a misprint. Because that's how I remember reciting it...

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Thank you

Postby lizzie » Wed Nov 01, 2006 9:10 pm

It does help. I'll pass it along.
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Postby Sue Ellen » Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:30 pm

Wow that gives me chills.

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